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  • Thirteen Years

    Titled "godfather of snickers"
    It all started with my 19-year old self

    eating a chocolate bar at the Food Co-Op

    of Binghamton University in 2008.

     

    I’m wearing a custom spray-paint T-shirt

    I had gotten at “Six Flags” for $30.

    I said “I want a Penguin with a palm tree

    AND coconuts.”  And that’s what I got.

    (Note:  not sure if the bowtie was artistic flare).

     

    The picture title is “godfather of snickers,”

    so I shouldn’t disagree with history

    but that would mean I bought a Snickers

    and BROUGHT it to an organic eatery.

     

    Now that I think about it:

    I WOULD do that.

    Back then I did what I wanted

    rarely even realizing

    if I stepped on toes.

     

    (This made ball-room dancing

    difficult:  but let’s NOT go there).

     

    Yes, as you can imagine,

    this habit of stepping on toes

    while often unawares,

    would bite me MANY times

    and in many ways:

    BUT LET’S STAY FOR NOW:

    in the “good old days.”

     

    These are days just BEFORE

    cell phone cameras took over.

    The days when ironically,

    I saw no need to take my own photos

    and rarely had to even ask.

     

    I would do my “crazy” thing

    and others would take care of

    pictures AND tagging.

    Some were friends,

    some were random, thus:

    some photos I NEVER got.

     

    I can recall ONE I never saw.

    I was watching the sunset

    from a brick ledge near Fine Arts.

     

    I was coping with “unrequited love,”

    but again, let’s SKIP that part,

    as an army of other poems

    ALREADY cover it.

     

    Anyway, back to the ledge/sunset.

    I MUST have looked half-way decent

    (or we can give all credit to the sky)

    because someone asked permission

    to take my photo and I said: “why not?”

     

    These were the days when

    musicians would still

    plop down ALONE on the grass

    and give impromptu concerts

    for people they didn’t know;

    not for money OR survival:

    just to express themselves.

     

    Yes, this might still happen

    but I’ve been to several colleges

    and Universities since withdrawing

    from Binghamton for health-reasons.

     

    Rarely, have I seen

    that kind of passion.

    The few times, years later,

    everyone who pulled out a guitar

    seemed guilt-ridden:  like they needed

    to be forgiven for self-expression.

     

    At Binghamton, I WAS reprimanded

    ONCE for playing music too loud:

    and it was actually my fault.

    I was learning to play my djembe drum

    in a courtyard:  and it was class-time.

     

    The Professor was very nice.

    Yes, he didn’t think twice

    about doing the job

    of telling me off himself!

     

    True, professors can be intimidating

    but I was just happy

    that from the effected party

    a representative was chosen

    or a volunteer willingly appeared

    and status was not factored in

    in a way where this task was

    “below him.”

     

    He was obviously a bit annoyed

    but he was friendly,

    mentioned music faculty

    AND other students

    who I could connect with

    before politely telling me:

    not to bother students trying to study.

     

    Am I wrong to think,

    that these days (2020-2021),

    that my “music”

    might be considered

    increasingly offensive?

    Perhaps, very much akin to

    “the drums of war,”

    and masked campus police

    might have confiscated

    the new drum

    I was happy to be learning

    how to play?

     

    Just let that sink in:

    the situation isn’t “wrong” as

    either way, there is “justification.”

    However, ONE scenario ends up

    with both sides more or less happy

    AND with mutual understanding

    (it even got through my thick head).

     

    The OTHER can leave both sides

    much more annoyed

    maybe even hating their lot in life

    and feeling crappy.

     

    So yes:  when people say “be nice,”

    because “it can change a life”

    they often mean it literally.

    MOVING this event forward

    over a decade

    might CHANGE it drastically.

     

    That’s why I feel bad

    for the masked kid in the snow

    waiting alone, in the dark, for the bus

    to high school in 2021.

     

    I’m literally in pajamas making waffles

    AND I REMEMBER:  so damn well.

    I NEVER wanted to go to that hell.

     

    Mom had a good point:  “maybe he’s happy.”

    I said:  happy or not, I saw myself in him.

    Almost no teen likes waking up before the sun,

    to wait alone in the cold, with a mask

    to get their first-period “education.”

     

    I’ve SLEPT through MANY “1st period(s),”

    so I know.  Not the BEST time to:

    absorb information.

     

    But MOVING ON:  all I wanted to do:

    was give the poor kid a (sealed) bottle

    or Organic Honey Crisp Apple Juice.

     

    But I knew it might make me a criminal.

    So I stayed in my warm kitchen.

    I don’t remember what tunes

    Alexa was spinning.

    I couldn’t stop thinking how:

    we’re told to love our neighbors

    BUT NOW there are all these barriers.

    WE’RE ALL “carriers” of pathogens:

    NOT human beings, that’s secondary.

     

    And fear is so rife,

    that I suppose it’s “normal”

    to think I could have spiked

    the kid’s apple juice

    with just about anything.

     

    I MIGHT NOT have been

    helping at all.

    The kid could have been:

    traumatized.

     

    So I did the “spiritual” thing.

    I was sending lots of “good energy”

    lots of “good vibes,”

    and I felt SO DAMN guilty

    for what I felt was a cop-out.

     

    Nowadays, cops have A LOT

    of jobs because

    we rarely speak to each other.

    So I hear those sirens blaring

    every night when I lie down.

     

    Medical emergencies:  yes.

    Domestic violence:  yes

    Breaking and entering:  perhaps…

    But WHO’S going to go

    INTO someone else’s house

    EVEN if it’s to steal something?

     

    In the looming threat of “the virus”

    many of the people that love us:

    don’t even visit us.

    So I’m pretty sure thieves

    in this neighborhood

    will stick to robbing places

    with more cash reserves

    higher “cleanliness standards.”

     

    Getting back to this picture:

    it’s one of my earliest “profile photos.”

    This was about the time I got Facebook.

    Never before did I have friends

    I felt I needed “a social network” for.

     

    Now I get it:  Facebook is not inherently bad.

    It’s basically like how LIFE got awful 2020-21

    in many ways:  but LIFE IS NOT BAD.

     

    In the SAME WAY, life also got:  amazing.

    It’s hard to believe:  but it’s really true.

    I was morbidly depressed for 14 years

    and 2021 is the first year I started

    free from depression

    and actually, full of hope.

     

    Ironically, I was sick with:

    “the Coronavirus,”

    so I was ALSO miserable.

    But we can feel miserable

    without being depressed.

     

    I kept telling my parents:

    “I’m fine.”

    Even when I wasn’t, physically.

     

    Because when I needed help:

    I’D ASK, and sometimes:

    IT WAS NOT GIVEN.

     

    For the longest time:

    I wanted Organic Fruit Juice.

    They just didn’t get it.

     

    They kept offering Mucinex,

    telling me I should see a doctor,

    to ask for an antibiotic

    that if I didn’t, I’d end up hospitalized:

    just like I did in the past.

     

    Because hospitalization:  that’s my thing.

    It seems once you’re known for it,

    it’s expected of you:  I’m hospital-bound.

     

    I don’t remember what pill it was

    but my mom would tell me to swallow

    before bed, because “your fever can

    get so high that you die.”

     

    I literally had to put it in my mouth

    and then spit it into a tissue upstairs.

    Otherwise the fear of my:

    fever-induced-demise

    would keep mom so worried that

    it would actually keep me from sleep.

     

    But getting back to Organic Apple Juice,

    I DID eventually get tons of it:

    when my parents realized I wouldn’t quit.

    When I basically told them:

    kick me out or let me make

    my own health decisions.

     

    Yes, it DID help

    that I was underweight.

    I had become vegetarian

    in mid-November, got Covid

    mid-December and suddenly:

    cooking rarely seemed appealing

    and shopping was out of the question

    because I needed to quarantine.

     

    In addition to not swallowing

    OTC medication,

    I was also not swallowing

    meat-based dinner.

     

    Swallowing anything was hard.

    So, I was also struggling to swallow:

    my Organic Whole Food supplements.

    I would choke on them, again and again.

     

    Coughing was a nightmare:

    if only because other people heard.

    EXPECTORATING was seen

    as a bad thing and “proof”

    that my way was wrong

    and I needed more “advice,”

    and more intervention.

     

    My dad was convinced

    I was “eating tissues,”

    and I thought, but didn’t tell him:

    “if that were the case,

    At 31 years old, 5’9” or 5’10,”

    I never would have hit 140 lbs,”

    which likely was my lowest

    since middle school.

     

    Yes!  You are right!

    I COULD USE that Snickers!

    Tell it to travel through time:

    but it would STILL BE inappropriate.

     

    Because I’ve learned my lessons,

    since then I’ve tried to be myself

    WHILE NOT stepping on people’s toes.

    NO, I DON’T succeed all the time.

    But I know immediately when I screw up.

    And I DON’T usually need a professor

    to show up and patiently teach me:

    to be considerate.

     

    I THANK that man who’s probably

    and old-guy now.

    I never did “lookup” that “great”

    harmonica player, he talked about.

    THUS:  I still really suck at harmonica.

     

    I CARRIED that harmonica

    on my vacation walk

    back and forth to Whaler’s Village.

    Filled with hypocritical signs like:

    ALOHA: is an acronym.

    And they BROKE IT DOWN

    SO EACH LETTER:

    STOOD FOR A COVID RULE.

     

    Keep your distance, don’t touch

    WHEN YOU DO say “hello:”

    just use your elbow as a greeting.

     

    And the people that I was meeting

    were all juggling this “nonsense”

    OR “perfect sense” depending.

    (Never did get to practice harmonica,
    just like I never got to sit on all
    the benches that said "no sitting,"
    and I held my smoothie until
    I got to a "safe" place to drink it,
    lest I make anyone uncomfortable
    with my mask-pulled down).


    THE NEW ME takes lots of photos,

    as you all know.

    Apparently, I’m not photogenic anymore,

    because MOST times I have to ask,

    and even give people my phone-camera,

    just to get a shot.

     

    I was trying to realize WHY that was.

    I was THINKING that maybe it was penance.

    After, admittedly being a self-absorbed jerk

    MAYBE I needed to see the beauty in others

    and study how the world works:

    even with all its own cracks and fallibility.

     

    Photo-taking was hard for EVERYONE

    as almost NO ONE wanted to touch:

    someone else’s phone.

    Apparently, the rule is nearly written

    in DNA at this point or soaked in our bones.

     

    Thus I found myself taking pics

    for strangers, when I wandered off

    from my family (and was later scolded

    for taking the wrong path to follow my dad).

     

    Yet, I didn’t care much

    because I knew where I was,

    told them how much time I wanted

    at this park and my path

    had led me somewhere

    very beautiful.

     

    Their path led:

    to where I’ve been before.

    Mine led:

    to where I had not.

     

    Very simple:  so I’ll move on

    TO THE CLIFF GUY.

     

    Yes, there was a cliff guy.

    (or was he a “bluff” guy?

    a “dais” guy?  Not sure,

    as I never got his name,

    so I HAVE to describe

    the man by the terrain

    where I found him).

     

    But hey, I TOOK his picture.

    I met him alone, on this awesome

    bluff/cliff/dias – whatever

    and he seemed to really be enjoying

    his perch above a black sand cove.

     

    I did want to see the view,

    but RESPECT for spots is paramount.

    He discovered the spot:  so it’s his spot.

    That is, until he is done enjoying it.

     

    I had a man (at the next stop

    on The Road to Hana)

    tell me and Chrissy (my sister)

    that we’re “hogging the best spot”

    and that we should move.

     

    I looked at that man and said:

    “We’ll be GONE in 60 seconds.”

    FOR REFERENCE:  we had only

    been in this spot by the “Sacred Pools”

    for about one minute and 30 seconds.

    MAYBE two minutes, AT MOST.

     

    I digress, but just a “life lesson,”

    nature is not about “the best spot.”

    This also can easily be applied to life.

     

    Yes, there are obviously more:

    impressive, seemingly beautiful,

    wonderful situations to be in:

    but so what?

     

    First question:  do you own that spot?

    I know that the same could be said to me,

    but that’s assuming I HAD been,

    or was planning on hogging it all day.

    Yes, someone made that assumption.

    Their patience only spanned

    1 min 30 seconds to at most, 2 minutes.

     

    There were no substitutions for this man.

    We need to drive home in our vans

    maybe get back in our tour busses

    and that’s all that went through his mind.

    Some just need to check

    every box they can to feel complete.

     

    Alright, back to the guy on the cliff.

    Pretty sure you got the point of “spots,”

    it’s about ENJOYING where you are,

    not about shoving people over

    for “the best spot.”

     

    Because FYI, Me and Chrissy

    actually, WAITED our turn:

    for “the best spot” (prior to

    that man’s arrival, it seems).

     

    It was funny though because

    cliff guy wasn’t wearing a mask

    AND I was okay with that

    BUT I happened to be wearing one.

     

    So he kept looking at me, nervously.

    I kept nodding, but stepping a bit away,

    so as to give him space, and not bother him.

     

    Eventually, I found out “the problem.”

    HE WANTED: his photo taken.

    Yet he was worried I would be offended.

     

    Once I understood, I awkwardly took

    his tiny – but cool looking, actual camera.

    This was a digital camera, but LIKELY

    the first time I used a dedicated camera

    since 13 YEARS ago when my friends

    and acquaintances actually practiced:

    “photography” on me.

     

    I basically felt like my life

    had come full circle

    at this moment.

    In a very awkward,

    but very appropriate way.

     

    I don’t know this guy

    (hence why I call him “cliff guy,”)

    but I hope he’s happy with his picture.

     

    He might be an artist, a businessman,

    a famous person or even a well-dressed

    bum who happens to have

    a tiny, waterproof, digital camera.

    (Yes, my memory is returning,

    I DID ask if it was waterproof,

    and he said it was:  so that may

    or may-not kill the “bum” possibility).

     

    Though, I mean, come-on writers:

    “The Bum with a Waterproof

    Digital Camera” does sound

    like an interesting story, no?

     

    Anyways, before I left,

    he asked if I wanted

    my photo taken.

    Because I had mentioned

    that I was always the one

    taking my family’s photos

    so I really knew how it felt

    to wish that someone

    would do that for me

    more frequently.

     

    I told him thanks,

    but that was okay.

    In my mind,

    I had totally intruded

    on the edge of

    this man’s spot.

     

    I am just the wandering fool.

    I pull up my mask when

    I see people coming

    who are wearing them.

     

    I keep it off when

    I pass people

    who are happily

    enjoying

    the unfiltered

    Hawaiian Breeze.

     

    And I am criticized

    when I say

    that I’m happy

    that in a State Park

    in the middle

    of the most beautiful

    nature:  I can take off

    my mask sometimes.

     

    “Even 40-year old’s die

    in my hospital without

    co-morbidities.”

     

    Is this new?

    40-year old’s

    were impervious before?

     

    Oh, but I forgot.

    This is Covid.

    Covid killed the 40 y/o.

    And somehow

    a MASK could have

    saved the man?

    I supposed either that

    or it can save “other people”

    is the implication.

     

    Here I was taking

    what are likely

    memorable photos,

    of precious life moments

    and I SHOULD have been

    protecting them from Covid:

    even if they would prefer

    that I just take their picture.

     

    MY MASK this past 13 years:

    it’s just like how I was

    in Waiʻānapanapa State Park.

     

    I never know when to wear it.

    No one’s ever always happy

    when I have it on or off.

    But I keep toggling.

     

    Sometimes, I THINK

    my mask is off,

    and it’s not.

    I LITERALLY

    had a long conversation

    with a store manager

    in Whaler’s Village

    and he FORGOT

    he wasn’t wearing a mask.

    (not that I minded).

     

    I actually didn’t notice.

    If someone has a mask on

    or off:  the only reason

    I notice is to MAKE SURE

    I’m doing the “right” thing.

     

    So, I was in a store,

    so I had my mask on.

    Because that’s what

    they say we have to do.

     

    But I ended up getting to see

    without realizing any “problem,”

    someone’s mouth move

    as they were talking.

     

    It was the beginning of the day,

    and he had just opened up shop,

    and he was 60+ years old.

    I know this, because he said

    that he was 10 years old

    at Woodstock

    when he went to see:

    Jimi Hendrix.

     

    Okay, I did the math,

    he’s about 62 years old.

    Basically, the same age

    as my dad.

    Dad is an awesome guy

    but he tends to talk about

    Woodstock like he was there.

     

    Apparently, this guy,

    as a 10-year-old kid,

    really wanted to see

    Jimi Hendrix.

     

    I don’t think he had,

    full access, or a ticket –

    I don’t even know,

    if they DID tickets

    for Woodstock

    because for all I know

    some people could have paid

    with cannabis.  Like I said

    don’t know, not sure.

     

    What I do know:

    is that he was close enough

    to the source of something

    that HE THOUGHT was special.

     

    It doesn’t matter if his view

    was BAD.

    It doesn’t matter,

    if he could BARELY hear

    the guitar (I think the man

    was a really good guitarist, right?)

     

    He was there, he was part

    of the history he wanted to be.

    YES, he was working in retail

    when we met in Whaler’s Village.

     

    There are MANY artists,

    especially in 2021,

    who can no longer make

    a living off of their craft,

    due to bad luck, competition

    not being perceived as

    “good enough” OR

    a combination of many factors.

     

    I bought a coffee mug.

    PS: it’s an awesome coffee mug.

    And the next two times

    that I visited, there was

    a woman cashiering,

    who was nice,

    but a bit more businesslike.

     

    Another person, I might not

    see again, but so what?

    It would have been great,

    to catch up again

    because I told him

    about my last attempt

    to see the sunrise

    at Haleakalā Crater.

     

    Two years ago,

    it was pouring rain

    on-top of that mountain

    and I wanted to will the sky

    to open just a bit

    so I can see the sunrise from it.

    In the end, I just got wet, cold

    and then sick.

     

    He said

    “If it’s raining

    when you go up

    in the morning

    it usually doesn’t stop.”

     

    I said thanks, yes,

    I won’t be that stupid

    a second time.

    If it rains:

    I will accept my loss/

    I will stay in the bus.

     

    This brings us back,

    to my “godfather of snickers”

    picture from 2008.

    We’ve discussed enough

    about musical performance

    about actually taking pictures

    (or not taking but receiving them).

    You MIGHT not believe this

    BUT I HAVE chosen an “angle”

    for this poem.

    It might seem like it has nothing

    to tie it together.

    But it does:  that’s my job.

     

    It’s about how my life

    has changed in 13 years,

    how the world has changed

    from my perspective,

    especially now

    when I’m no longer

    feeling like I’m better,

    than others or that I’m owed

    something, or many things

    that I don’t have.

     

    “Net: net” as my Dad says,

    the world situation

    is ultimately comedic relief.

    It’s not that it isn’t serious,

    it’s not that it isn’t harrowing.

    It’s that:  I’m doing all I can

    OR all I’m willing to do

    in order to help.

     

    The rest is just laughing

    at all the increasingly

    ridiculous happenings:

    that we blame “Covid” for.

     

    In the future,

    this will be

    an EPIC and hilarious

    but also very SAD list.

     

    Covid prevented me

    from giving a high-school kid

    a bottle of Organic Apple Juice?

    Should I really say it that way?

     

    NO.  I don’t think so.

    For a long time, I hated my town.

    I stayed away from these people

    for many reasons.  One of them is:

     

    We’re an upper-middle-class

    mostly white neighborhood

    and I heard a few “there goes

    the neighborhood[s]”

    when Hispanics or African

    Americans moved in.

     

    Yes, we all deny this.

    It NEVER happened.

    Okay, it didn’t.

    I’m a LIAR.

    But I’m also a Poet,

    at this moment,

    NOT a historian.

    So I DON’T have

    to have it recorded,

    along with the date,

    ALONG with WHO

    and HOW MANY

    people said it.

     

    Aren’t you all (finally)

    thankful that I’m a poet?

     

    Nope, it was a joke.

    Being able to say

    what we want

    is one of the big dangers

    of being any kind of writer.

     

    Even journalists or historians

    who want to say the truth

    can’t always do it.

     

    They have to “prove it,”

    even when they have

    already “proven it”

    then they can get “discredited,”

    if what they say is unpalatable.

    They can lose jobs,

    if they have jobs,

    they can be threatened

    if there is something

    that can be threatened.

     

    Why do I say this?

    Because I want

    to bring you back

    to that annoying guy

    banging his drum

    during class-time.

     

    Let’s all be mindful,

    of how we treat each-others.

    Even if one of us

    is without a doubt

    being a jerk.

     

    WE ALL are jerks sometimes.

    So, like:  next, it could be your turn.

     

    I’ve spent many years,

    learning not to be hurtful

    and still be who I am –

    which was actually

    very difficult.

     

    Because, I tend to point out

    TRUTHS that we don’t want

    to see.  Just like now.

    Some DO NOT want to see this.

     

    But I just do it: write anyway:

    when I feel compelled to.

    Whether you believe it or not:

    I aim for the nicest way

    I can think of, and it becomes

    that much harder to write

    (yet very worthwhile).

     

    I’ve actually,

    become a fan of personal

    “verbal” filters.

    Few believe that,

    but I actually have one on:

    right now.

     

    So, I’m sorry if

    what comes off as

    my slap in the face

    couldn’t be any gentler.

     

    Life has slapped me

    many times, to various

    degrees of pain:

    and I needed them all.

     

    But if you can’t deal

    or don’t want to feel bad

    and you often do with my art

    then: we can try to stay apart.

     

    I AVOIDED all the “unrequited

    love” nonsense, in this poem:

    but that doesn’t mean it never

    actually happened.

     

    Lots of experience feeling alone.

    Lots of Exp. feeling misunderstood.

    Again, so what?

     

    If I have people who understand:

    great!  If I don’t:  I’ll be just fine.

     

    In fact, I can be happy.

    For proof: watch me, or don’t.

    But I give you permission,

    right now:  to take pictures.

     

    Because for the love of God,

    I’m not going to get a selfie stick.

    Nothing against them:

    at the moment, I just consider it

    rather UN-artistic.

     

    And one thing that always

    ALWAYS made me feel better:

    was art, expression, being who

    we truly are or TRYING to.

     

    Perhaps there’s a book called

    “The Art of the Selfie Stick,”

    and I’ve just never read it.

    Even if there is, I’m not sure I will.

     

    If I don’t look awful,

    (but obviously can’t compare

    to the sky at sunset)

    take a pic and tag me.

    I REALLY don’t care

    if I see myself as “pretty.”

     

    I used to tag others in photos.

    Now I have to ask first.

    Everyone has a reason,

    not to be tagged.

    So much deliberation

    regarding a memory.

     

    Not me.  I am among the first:

    to say I AM THAT MORON.

    Really?  Have you seen me?

    I can be and AM, that guy.

    They called me “crazy”

    for (mostly) good reasons.

     

    You might have realized,

    how important “memory”

    is to me.  However, my memory

    is FAR from photographic.

     

    Which means I forget things,

    just like everybody does.

    Currently, I’m trying to remember,

    exactly HOW MUCH I asked

    that poor woman at Six Flags

    to spray-paint on my shirt.

     

    Because I think I might

    have requested a rainbow too.

    (See:  I was a glutton).

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